[Pharo] Personal fitness tracker web app.
About page.
src/MyFitnessTracker/MFTAboutPage.class.st
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'What better way than to build my own Personal Fitness Tracker?!'.
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html heading level2 with: 'Who I am'.
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html paragraph:
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'I am an engineer working in Europe, with a deep passion for health and fitness. Publishing My Fitness Tracker is a way for me to give thanks to everyone whose path I have crossed.'
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'I am an engineer working in Europe, with a deep passion for health and fitness. Publishing My Fitness Tracker is a way for me to give thanks to everyone who has inspired me throughtout my fitness journey.'
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paragraph:
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'I am developing My Fitness Tracker for my own personal use case, first and foremost; '
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'secondly, for the benefit of as many fitness enthusiasts as possible; '
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, 'thirdly, because I''ve found to be a fun experience. '
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'secondly, for the benefit of as many other fitness enthusiasts as possible; '
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'I''m already rich of the joy this project has brought me, and the paid '
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'thirdly, for the enjoyment that developing this web application brings me. '
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'The paid feature enables me to increase the amount of fitness enthusiasts I can cater to.'
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